To Whom It May Concern at
Before I start into this letter I want to say how much I have enjoyed your English (Writing & Grammar 11, 2nd Edition) curriculum. While I do not particularly excel in English, your course is the best and most interesting English course I have ever found. Most of the time I have found that the pictures are well suited to accompany the sentences.
However, I felt mislead by the fact that on page 105 your seventh sentence (“Your grandparents will probably be happy to share how they felt when WWII ended or when a man first walked on the moon.”) and picture below do not match.

As an avid reader on the Apollo space program, I immediately recognized the picture, which is of Jim Irwin on Apollo 15. I felt misled by the fact that the sentence read “when a man first walked on the moon” and the accompanying picture shows the eighth man on the moon.
There are several clues that show the picture is from a later Apollo mission. First of all, the Lunar Rover (the car-type vehicle on the right) was only on Apollos 15, 16 and 17.
Second, at the
There are a variety of ways you could fix this discrepancy. You could either change the sentence to read, “when men walked on the moon”, or change the picture to an image of Buzz Aldrin, who accompanied Neil Armstrong on Apollo 11. Apollo 11 and Apollo 15 are both note-worthy missions, but when talking about either I would highly recommend that you use a picture or sentence from the correct mission.
Sincerely,
Tennessee Photobug


It was really, really fun...even though it sprinkled! When Alison kept wanting to enter things we would tell her, "OK, you can, but you may not get any ribbon". She knew that. Well, what do you know we go to the Fair today and find she won TWO first prize awards and a second!!! I think she had entered a basket, cooking, and a sewing craft. Alison was very excited about that. She totalled that in prize money she'll get $13.0o! :D Mom also got 3 first places (on a basket, healthy cooking and doll dress) , and Dad a third on his drawing. I did not get any awards on my pictures.





FYI: This week in my English class I had to write a folktale...here it is. I based it on our animals, so it is kinda true and not true all at the same time...enjoy! :)
